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Review:Leent says:
Very interesting use of tense. I like how it actually added a darker element, because it was ongoing with the reader, making it seem as if we were the actual fly on the wall here. It was bitter, with an aftertaste of sweetness, if that makes any sense at all. At first, the movement seemed strange, but it opened up, and flowed rather nicely. Great job, you are a brave woman for trying it, and an even smarter one since I think you succeeded ;)

Author's Response: Aww, thanks for the compliment(s)! I'm happy everything worked well. You're spot on with the bitter/sweet thing - both Tori and Sirius are bitter about their past, and Tori has very low self-esteem, etc. But in the end, Sirius helps her and feels more like a father himself! =]

Thanks for the review - I'm glad my Sirius/OC pleased a legendary Marauder writer.


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