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Review:RonsGirlFriday says:
Ooh, Charlie's finally here! Although I do like how we got to know Kate pretty well over the course of a few chapters before Charlie entered the picture again.

You have a really nice way with words. I especially noticed in this chapter when you were describing the Ministry -- for example, with this line:

"No one seemed particularly happy to be there but everyone understood its necessity; one important step toward reaching some penultimate goal."

That, as well as the description of the Ministry as an institution that had failed everyone repeatedly. It's very fitting of the Ministry we know from the HP series -- all wrapped up in its own importance, but woefully ineffective.

Great job again, of course!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad the more snarky comments about the Ministry stood out in a good way. Somewhere along the way, Kate as a character started channeling some old Moody "Ministry Malcontent." Maybe that's just a bit of me sneaking into Kate. Thanks for another awesome review.

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