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Review:RonsGirlFriday says:
Ah, bureaucracy! I like it when fics use issues that readers can relate to - bringing a real world element to stories set in the magical world - like budgets and land ownership and things like that.

I really like Henry. He seems like an eccentric, and even slightly paternal, older man clinging to his passion and his pet projects because he knows he's doing something worthwhile. He's a lot of fun to read! I like Kate, too - she seems like a down to earth person who does an honest day's work, and that makes her very relatable.

Also, good idea with the wizarding archaeologists and how some other wizards consider it a Muggle pursuit. I think it makes sense that there would be wizarding archaeologists, especially if they really want to learn as much as they can about different kinds of magical creatures. I'm fascinated by things like dinosaur digs, so I like seeing it translated into dragons.

Another great chapter! 10/10

Author's Response: I always wanted to be an archeologist when I was a kid, so I'm totally living out some lost dreams here. And I'm glad you found the ideas realistic. I was really trying to ground the story in things I could relate to on some level. I've been worried about Kate being likable, so thank you so much for commenting on her. It seems the other characters, like Henry, are just easier to write. Thank you again for the review. I really appreciate it.

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