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Review:Enya says:
I loved this Susan :)

I had a faint suspicion why Sirius had asked her out when Eleanor heard those girls talking in the library, glad to be proven true at the end xD

I'm glad you also gave Peter some character instead of making him a slimy little follower like I've read him many times in other fanfics (or even fanfictions that just don't mention him while witing about the Marauders). Even if he was a pushover in JKR's storyline, he's still part of that group.

This was a really good story, very believable in any case :)

Enya

Author's Response: The clues were there, yet still some readers missed them entirely, or were in denial, either one. ;)

Thank you very much for this, Enya! It's wonderful that you liked the story (and even more so that you thought it believable - as that's what I was going for). Finally I got my revenge on those who leave Peter out entirely, or make him seem like an idiot boy, because he couldn't have been, really, not if he was one of the Marauders. :)


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