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Review:evelett says:
Amazing!
I am going to write about Lily's date.
His name is Cal. He is 6 foot 2 inches tall. He has hazel brown hair that sweeps over his eyes. Cal has the most amazing electric blue eyes that can make you feel as if you're suspended in the heavens. He has a strong build and lots of muscles but not overly so. He is a pureblood with old money. Lily and her friends run into Cal in Diagon Alley while dress shopping. They run into him agian while they are having lunch and he joins them. After talking for a while during lunch Lily is quite taken with his wit and charm and asks Cal to be her date for the ball. He of course accepts the invitation. The next night when Cal comes it is James that opens the door. James and Cal are old enemies and Cal is just transferring to Hogwarts this year for his seventh year. James tells Cal to leave and that he is not welcome when Lily comes down the stairs in her amazing green gown. Upon seeing her they both fall silent. James is thrilled and surprised to see her coming towards him and is about to say something when Cal greets her and kisses her hand. James becomes outraged and barely contains his hatred. He politely excuses himself. Later that night Lily leaves Cal to go to the loo, seeing this James confronts Cal. The dashing boy becomes menacing. He tells James to stay away from his Lily. He tells him that James will never have her. When James tells him to leave her alone. Cal replies that he can do whatever he wants with her and that James can do nothing to stop him.
Though Cal is nice to Lily he is quite evil to James. Cal uses Lily to hurt James and to get back at him. Cal feels nothing for Lily. James tries to get her to stay away from him.
I hope you like it. I realize that you will only be using the character but I thought it would be nice to give you an idea of what I was going for. Hope you pick mine but I can't wait to see what you do with the story it is amazing. Thank you for your time.

Author's Response: Keep an eye out for a new chapter soon! Cal has won and I might use some of your ideas later on :)

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