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Review:Amulya_HPfan says:
You know, I've read a lot of stories about how Teddy and Victoire are meant to be. And I really love the ship-so, it slightly annoys me (or really, really annoys me) when someone messes up this full-of-potential relationship. But, you did a wonderful job on this, especially for fitting that much emotion into a one-shot. I hope you do a sequel, or some more, just because I think you might really find a niche in Teddy/Victoire. It didn't come out as cheesy and cliche, but it didn't come out as trying too hard either. I really liked the fact that (other than the way you used correct grammer!) you used Aaron to connect to what we remember of Neville from his Hogwarts days, but also to really make Victoire realize whats going on. And Teddy's reaction "I BLOODY LOVE YOU!" really makes me want to just yell that at someone someday, just to see them turn around and try to put me in a therapy room. Ha, maybe I will try that now. Going back to the point, you are quite good at, well, doing kisses, I guess. It wasn't one of those long, drawn-out, describe how "his pink tongue goes into her mouth and she smiles up as she runs her hands around his neck" kind of sentences. Wow, I really have no idea where I came up with that example. But, brilliant job! It was a cheery one-shot!

Author's Response: Oh my :D I really really like these long, wonderful reviews :D I'm so glad you liked it! I've never written a next-gen story before - well, none of them have been posted, because it freaking scares me to death to do so xD But I can cheerfully inform that a sequel is soon ready, and it will give readers a whole new idea of the "cool and collected" Teddy - so to speak :D Anyway, I'm so glad you commented on "kisses" - I hate those things too, and I tried to make it as simple and brutally honest as possible. I suppose it helps when you're married, you don't overthink it, I suppose :D

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