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Review:celticbard says:
Hi morgana!
It's celticbard from eHPf, here to review as promised. I must say, I've been reading this story for such a long time now, but you still manage to surprise me! ^_^ This chapter had a strong sense of rising action...I was on the edge of my seat the entire time. The situation has grown quite perilous. Harry is trapped at Hogwarts with almost no contact with the outside world. Thank goodness Ginny was astute enough to notice her bracelet.

Also, I love the way you outlined Bill's approach to the Gringotts break-in. He was very methodical. And Draco's chat with Father Mckenna at the beginning was absolutely brilliant! McKenna is just a wonderful OC and I commend you for his originality. He definitely is a convincing priest and I just loved how he was able to figure out the complex nature of Draco and Harry's relationship.

The last paragraph really left me anxious for more. Will Draco help Harry now that he is in trouble or will he fall back on old habits? As always, I truly enjoyed reading this, morgana. Please feel free to drop by my thread and request another review. I hope you have a great weekend! Take care!

Best,
celticbard

Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much.

Very encouraging review. I'm so pleased that I got you intrigued.

Ginny is a very resourceful person in my view, so she will be an important addition to the team. Yes, the situation for the Order as a whole is getting worse by the minute.

I'm very glad that you think my Bill works. We don't know an awful lot about this character so I often find this canon minor characters the hardest to write. I went for logical and methodical because that's what he sounded to me like in DH and maybe because of his job.

Now, Draco and Father Sean. This OC has been quite well received by readers which is very, very encouraging. Some people imagine all priests very formal but the background story I have given him would make him a lot more involved and in touch with the community. He has been around teenagers a lot and I see him as someone who can grasp their psychological make-up pretty well.

Draco, well, that's the question, isn't it? His circumstances are pretty different to what they were in canon, so it may well be in his interest to help. However, he's a very cunning type and no he doesn't see Harry as his best mate by any means. An ally possibly... I have a trick out of my sleeve with him.

Thanks so so much. Your reviews are always very much appreciated.

Have a lovely weekend also. x


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