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Review:Groundswell says:
Wow. Just wow. I love this.

I can definitely feel the Nickelback in this (big fan here :P), and I think you made it fit perfectly. Not just with the sentense half taken from the song, but the whole mood of this and the way Draco was.

You have absolutely no reason to be even the tiniest bit nervous about this. You portrayed Draco spot on. With his thoughts and how he "admired" Harry (sort of), trying to "do what Potter would do". You've really made it believeable. He's not haughty or anything the old Draco was, but he's just... the same (does that make any sense?). Typical him... thinking Luna and Rolf were just trying to annoy him - this is a little of the old Draco we see here.

And the interaction between him and Rolf is perfect. It's not deep or anything, but fitting for a working place, and somehow I think Draco finds he actually kind of like Rolf maybe. It really flows there and I think that's where you should Draco's changing the most.
On the other hand I never pictured Draco chuckling, but maybe it's Astoria that brings it out in him...

You shift a little between past and present, at least in the part where he interacts with Rolf and Astoria. I don't know if it's because he's thinking it or what? It confuses me a little bit.

I think this is one of the first Draco stories I've ever read. And I was not disappointed. I smiled the whole way through of Draco's thoughts, those small things like the Dark Detector. It all was just so good.

The start of the second part... how could I forget it? I don't know why, but I just love it. Normally I find people's "lifestories" a little boring, but this really made me want to keep reading.

And when Rolf mentions Astoria in their conversation, you kind of already now tells us how Draco will meet her. You set the scene so we're not surprised that she's at the wedding. It's not just out of the blue. Am I making any sense?

I think there're so many great parts in this story, and I want to point all of them out, but really, it's the whole story. I love it, and you've written it so fantastically. Well done!

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