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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
hmmm. one of my favorite missing moments in DH. I like the sheer honesty. They both know what they mean to each other. I really like how you didn't waste time on any sentimental crap though. All too often when you read stories of Ron and Hermione's journey into the chamber its a big passionate scene. This approach results in two problems: firstly it demeans the enormity of their kiss actually portrayed in DH, and secondly it is out of character for the given circumstances. They are on the brink of the largest battle in wizarding history and possibly the last several hours as life as they know it. I completely envision it the way that you portrayed it here. Honest and brief. They continue on to aid Harry and can only hope that they make it through the coming battle to have their moment. :)

Well done. I like this story more and more with each new chapter... It makes me sad to think that there are only so many more moments to fill in. I do hope there is more coming. :) I love this story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for noticing that. Yeah I think that their kiss in the battle was the first properly 'obvious' thing that happened between them too, I prefer to use the missing moments to build the tension rather than go for out of character spurts of emotion and passion... Its not right, in my opinion. Thanks again for reviewing and I'm glad you like my version of events :D

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