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Review:Alopex says:
LMAO! Ok, well, actually, I thought the previous two chapters were a little funnier. *pinches thumb and forefinger together to indicate a miniscule amount* There were some great parts in here, though. I especially thought the "Whatever, I suck at summaries" was really good. I actually thought it was real for a split second, then I was like, wait a moment, momotwins always has a nice summary! Must be part of the story!

The author's note at the front was nice touch too. Yeah, I've seen some like that. However, I usually don't read on from that point! The part with the flashback was interesting. I've never seen one set off as enormously as yours was, of course, but do I ever find it irritating when a writer takes up half the chapter with a flashback and feels the need to announce the fact. Anyway, I was really snorting over the bit about heart arrythmias.

All the slang, electronic devices, vampire exhange students, utter ridiculousness of the characters, the questionable spelling in places . . . well, it was all quite funny. Of course, this story doesn't have a cohesive plot or characterization and is chock full of non sequiturs, but that's the whole point! So, yeah, fantastic job on the parody here! All you need to do now is include an author's note that says "no updates til i get 10 reviews" or "where do you think the story should go? should helga and lazar break up? or do you think i should introduce another oc? give me your ideas in a review!!!"

Author's Response: This story has absolutely no plot :D I couldn't bring myself to do that kind of an author's note haha. The validator in me would faint. The flashback is my favorite part of this chapter (I wrote the stage directions first then just put *topically irrelevant flashback* in between until I thought something up, since that's normally what goes in a flashback), though the sudden telepathy is probably my biggest pet peeve included in here. Yep, "I suck at summaries" is part of the parody. I can't stand seeing that, especially when I see it just after a perfectly respectable summary. Sigh. Kids these days. Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad it made you laugh :D

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