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Review:Fireball Nymph says:
Oh my god, I just love this one shot! It's so funny. I love your writing style. It's really fresh, and modern. Ginny's just so funny! I love how she calls the baby, it. I think that's a lot of mothers probably call their baby it ,and complain about swollen feet, and blubber. I would hate it. Pregnancy sounds horrible. It sicks. I mean, hormones,and weird cravings. It sure is ever girls dream right? (Snorts)

I just love Teddy. He's SO adorable. I can imagine him asking that to Ginny. I feel so bad for hm, never having a blood sister or brother. It must be horrible to have our parents dead. I also loved the part when Ginny was joking about not giving Teddy permission to call Ginny's kid his brother or sister. Even when pregnant, Ginny Potter's a comedian.

I also love the last 3 lines. Ginny's so surprised that her child actually likes her. Wow, it must be a really big epiphany for her.

And I also liked the part when Ginny was talking about how it was such turn off it was to call her mummy. LOL! I think it oughta be, don't you? I don't think anyone as young as Ginny would like to be called mummy.

This was my favorite lie. Best one. LMAO:

To which I replied 'you go shit out a watermelon and see if I'm being unreasonable."

Yeha, I think that Ginny's got a right to be an unreasonable bitch. I mean, girls get all the problems. Hormones, giving birth, painful sex. Everything bad for us. GOSH! Birth sounds really bad.

You know what you should do? Make a sequel. I would read it. It would be so good. You could make it about Ginny giving birth and then afterwards. Maybe from Harry's point of vein? Well, you don't have to take my suggestion, but I would really read it.

Well,this was completely and totally awesome. I love it Great job! :) 101010101010101010101010101010/10

Author's Response: Well you just pin pointed my own favourite line. Nice. I'm glad you gave it such a mark out of 10. I have no idea how you say '101010101010101010101010101010' so you've impressed me.

As for Harry's p.o.v I'm working on a pre-baby story at the moment. Although, sadly, I dont think Harry is as much of a comedian but rather a twit so in it.. should be interesting. I dont think he'd tell some to shit a watermelon. :D

Thanks for the review!


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