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Review:Phoenix_Flames says:
Hello, dear! I finally got around to this!

Wow. This was splendid. Beautiful. It was very emotional and beautiful. Gripping, compelling.

It was a little short for my liking, but that's all right when the story is this great. I liked the no-dialogue fact in this story. It's very nice. Most of the time, in a story like this, I can still hear what is not being said, and in this story, I heard a lot. It really gets all the emotions across.

However, I think you could fit just a tad more description. I want to watch just as much as I felt. ;) If that makes any sense at all. It's late, my head's getting woozy. Anyways! That's just one reader's opinion.

Well done!

8/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing this for me!

I appreciate your cc about the length and the level of description. I know those are both things I need to work on, as my style tends to be brief and to the point, and I'm always trying to remain conscious of that. So thank you for helping me keep sight of what needs to be improved. :-)

I really appreciate your input, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Cheers!


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