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Review:echo says:
I honestly have to say that that was very hard to read, the pacing was all off, every interesting thing that happened you glossed over it or went off into wild tangents about nothing. Yet the most mundane things you would write whole chapters on.

The angst was driving me crazy, i almost didn't want them to get together in the end. Coming from an avid Harmony lover this was hard to read.

Harry was way ooc, he basically took over Albus' character. Way too much authority and regimented for one so young. I thought he may have had them marching and saluting before it was over.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you did finish the whole thing and I'm sorry that it was not to your liking. I have to say that it was my first attempt at any kind of writing, but thank you for leaving me some feedback...even if it was not stating that you enjoied my story. A critque of anykind is always appreicated.

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