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Review:scooterbug8515 says:
Aisu! Sorry it has taken so long for me to get around to reading this. I was actually planning on reading this fic even before you requested it! It was really cute and a nice entry for the challenge. As you know mine is of a similar nature with Helga and Salazar being together. I really like how you handled the characters and totally respect how we handled the locket differently. It was really neat to see a new perspective. I sorta had in my head the cup was from Godric at least as far as my fic was concerned. Still a lovely piece. I noticed a few typos that I'm sure you'll want to get before the staff starts really looking in on these fics so I'll post them here.

At the start of your fic you have fthree rather than three.

"he took a step closer and lightly stroked her cheek with his thinger," I think thinger is supposed to be finger.

"She also know that the situation, the animosity, had gotten too strong for him to stay while keeping peace at the school." Know should be knew there.

"He looked at you, eyes dancing at because of the gift." You changed from third to second person in this sentence so you will want to change the you to her.

Aside form those mistakes, just as I said earlier, a fantastic job! 10/10!

Author's Response: I thought you might read it anyway, but I suppose I just really wanted a review. Yes, our two fics were similar, but I like their differences - your version of the locket was good, but one I wouldn't have thought of. Hm...I could definitely see Godric giving it to her, especially for your fic. It's funny how things could go either way, but I suppose that's the fun thing about writing. Thank you for pointing those out to me, they're rather embarrassing mistakes! And I have corrected them. Thank you for the great review!

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