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Review:RonsGirlFriday says:
Hmm...is it ok to say that Molly annoyed me a bit in this chapter? I like her and all, and your writing is wonderful as always, but the part when she shoved all the NEWT stuff in front of Arthur made me go, "Arrggh! Molly! Controlling much??"

It's interesting, because it's reminiscent of Hermione badgering Harry and Ron about studying, but for some reason it never rubbed me the wrong way when Hermione did it. The only thing I can think of is that Molly is doing it to her boyfriend, whereas Hermione did it to her friends - and by the time Hermione and Ron got involved, Ron knew full well what he was getting into. But I think poor Arthur was a little blindsided by it - it seemed he started dating Molly without full knowledge of what she was like.

I don't envy Arthur's job of telling her he made the Quidditch team. But I loved the part where he decided that he was doing her a favor by deciding to tell her after the fact, rather than beforehand. That was brilliant. :-)

10/10

Author's Response: Yes, she is tightening those apron strings, eh? lol. I really enjoyed writing his internal rationalizations for how he deals with Molly's neuroses haha. I wasn't thinking of it as her blindsiding him, since last year she gave him homework schedules lol. But yes, she's definitely a Scorpio and they can be quite controlling. Thanks for the review!

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