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Review:celticbard says:
Hi morgana!
I'm here to review, as requested. ^_^ Ah, this chapter brought me back to when I first read The Sorcerer's Stone so many years ago. To me, it contained that same sense of wonderment and magic that makes Rowling's books so enjoyable. I think you did an excellent job in portraying Father Mckenna's surprise at suddenly discovering the wizarding world. He seems like a very down-to-earth guy and I'm already thoroughly enjoying his interaction with Harry and Draco. Also, I think it would be quite unique if he, a Muggle priest, managed to solve the magical quandary Draco is facing.

The entire tone of this fic, the meshing of magic and religion, along with the exploration of spirituality has been entirely refreshing. I love the fact that you're trying to answer some deeper questions here. It truly adds depth to the fic.

I noticed several typos in this chapter as I read through, but honestly, they're easily remedied. ^_^ I find it helpful to read my chapters out loud. You'd be surprised how many typos you pick up. ;) I've also heard that reading a chapter backwards can help a writer spot errors, but I've never tried it myself.

As always, I really enjoyed this installment, morgana. Please feel free to stop by my thread and request another review. I hope you have a good week! Take care!

Best,
celticbard

Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much.

I guess now that you mention, it was a bit like when Harry discovered the magical world. I remembering commenting with someone that it was hard to imagine what it would be like to discover something like that existed.

I'm really glad that you think that mixing the worlds of magic works in this fic, especially since it is really the main theme.

I must check this again for typos. I'll try your tip about reading aloud.

Thanks so much!

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