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Review:Alexa_The_First says:
This is amazing, it's such a shame that it is only for a challenge. (Actually I think it works well this length so I take that back. It makes it a snapshot of their love and emotions which mean it is all the more intense in my opinion.)

Firstly I love your description; the atmosphere and the characters are described perfectly. I really like the phrase 'they both drank in the euphoria', I think it portrays the innocence they both possessed for situations like that but also the beauty.

I thought the formality with which Severus spoke was very fitting for his character, never quite managing to let those barriers down and never having experienced much in the way of teen culture. I think it added so well to how awkward they were as a couple which in turn made them perfect.

This is another great Severus/Lily that you've created in my opinion.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing, first of all. I worked very hard on the characterization for
Severus in this story, and I'm glad you liked it. I so happy you like Severus/Lily as much as I do!!


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