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Review:searching4neverland says:
This story is very different from the previous one. Its more insightful and personal, probably feels that way because you wrote Hermione's feeling so well. Her grief is overwhelming thought the whole story. I especially felt bad for her in the part when class is over, but she just keeps sitting there... It was very sad. The Lyrics and text are in perfect harmony, and it all spins together in a way you don't even feel the difference.
Your view in the afterlife is interesting, and how Harry described it was the cherry on top.

"It's beautiful, I play Quiddich with my dad, Sirius is here." very simple and very beautiful indeed.

Author's Response: It's always easier to convay strong emotions when you have someone to focus on. I could imagine her pain if she had lost Harry, especially in a violent and tragic way.. which was inevidable in this situation. The afterlife part kind of jsut came to me.. i think it was around 4 in the morning so who knows what was going on in my mind...lol. I'm so glad you liked the line about Quiddich, it was one of my peronsal favorites as well.

thanks for another wonderful review!
~Moon~


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