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Review:LonelyStar says:
Hey, this is LonelyStar here from the forums with the review you requested ^_^

Normally, I'm not a fan of the Tonks/Remus ship, but I have to make an exception for this. You wrote both of them perfectly, and I'm glad you didn't rush right into their relationship, so that third paragraph in, both of them were practically making a break for the bedroom. You developed the relationship as you went along, and I really liked that you did that.

Grammar and spelling was perfect. No mistake at all that I could see. But your dialogue and description were great, and one of my favourite aspects of this one-shot. Pace and flow was excellant as well. And I just want to add (even though this has nothing to do with the fic), I loved your bannar for this fic.

Sorry, there isn't much else for me to say except for this was a very well done fic!

Author's Response: Thank you for doing this! I really appreciate it. And sorry for asking you to do a Remus/Tonks, I wasn't aware that it wasn't your thing. *hides* Should make sure of these things better next time. But it makes me appreciate your review even more. :D

I'm glad the pacing sounded right. Having them rush off that quickly would really be extraordinary, haha, but it is common in fanfics, I guess. Their relationship is strange enough as is, and it seemed more canon to make it develop slowly, more naturally. :)

It's good to know that there's nothing incredibly wrong about this story. It was the first one I'd written in a few months, so I wasn't sure how out of shape my writing skills were. ;) Thank you for this!


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