Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Indigo Seas says:
Here as requested! ^_^

Wow, this was... wow. I really enjoyed it. Every bit of it. Wow.

Anyway... I'm kind of at a loss! It was really beautiful. The symbolism was wonderful, the description fantastic, and the emotion! Gosh, all the emotion was marvelous.

About the symbolism: I don't think you had too much at all. It was all very Luna-like to have that much of the symbolism that was there, so that's all good. Definitely not over the top; it was just the right amount. So kudos to you for that. ;)

And Luna was totally in character the entire time! That was fantastic as well. It seems so like her to say goodbye to Dumbledor (sp?) through a dream (or not, as you make it seem :D). Great job on that as well.

Overall: Fantastic. Terrific. Spiffy. It was great, and a beautifully written piece of fiction.

Best,
Rin

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so very much for the nice review. I'm glad that everyone thinks the symbolism wasn't too much and that the dream and dream-like qualities come through.

Emotion is something I have trouble with (I'm an older guy), so hearing that the emotion was marvelous puts me over the moon. A lot of credit goes to my beta reader for my novel length, reallyginny. Her suggestions and help with that have really helped my other fiction grow.

Thanks also for how fast you got to this.



Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Submit Report:  





All stories remain the property of their authors and must not be copied in any form without their consent. This is an unofficial, not for profit site, and is in no way connected with J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Books or Bloomsbury Publishing or Warner Bros. It is not endorsed by any of the aforementioned parties. Rights to characters and their images is neither claimed nor implied. The use of photographs and/or the likeness of any person contained herein does not imply endorsement of any kind. Any depictions were obtained through publically available sources and therefore fall under fair use. Although we may provide links to other websites, we are not responsible for any material at these sites. You acknowledge that you link to these other websites at your own risk. All original administrative content is copyright of the site owner and must not be copied in any form (electronic or otherwise) without the prior consent of the siteowner. ©2000-2012 Fanfictionworld.net

[terms of service] [report abuse] [privacy policy] [site credits]
 
 

navigation

home

search HPFF
read stories
write stories
login/register
get help
site links
forums
podcasts
Terms of Service
Site Rules
contact us

  
 
 

categories & genres

Genre:
- crossover
- drama
- fluff
- general
- horror/dark
- humor
- mystery
- romance
- action/adventure
- angst
- au
- young adult

Popular Pairings:
- harry/ginny
- ron/hermione
- james/lily
- draco/hermione
- more...

Format:
- one-shot
- short story
- novella
- novel
- short story collection
- songfic

  
 
 

quick links

my account
ToS
random story
site rules
help
merchandise


  
 
 

fanfictionworld.net