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Review:Indigo Seas says:
Here as requested! ^_^

Wow, this was... wow. I really enjoyed it. Every bit of it. Wow.

Anyway... I'm kind of at a loss! It was really beautiful. The symbolism was wonderful, the description fantastic, and the emotion! Gosh, all the emotion was marvelous.

About the symbolism: I don't think you had too much at all. It was all very Luna-like to have that much of the symbolism that was there, so that's all good. Definitely not over the top; it was just the right amount. So kudos to you for that. ;)

And Luna was totally in character the entire time! That was fantastic as well. It seems so like her to say goodbye to Dumbledor (sp?) through a dream (or not, as you make it seem :D). Great job on that as well.

Overall: Fantastic. Terrific. Spiffy. It was great, and a beautifully written piece of fiction.

Best,
Rin

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so very much for the nice review. I'm glad that everyone thinks the symbolism wasn't too much and that the dream and dream-like qualities come through.

Emotion is something I have trouble with (I'm an older guy), so hearing that the emotion was marvelous puts me over the moon. A lot of credit goes to my beta reader for my novel length, reallyginny. Her suggestions and help with that have really helped my other fiction grow.

Thanks also for how fast you got to this.



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