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Review:The Empress says:
Susan, I'm finally here with your review. :( Sorry about how long it took. Anyway...
I love how you formatted this, with the numbering. What an original way of doing flashbacks!
This flowed so well, and the idea is wonderful. It feels very real, and it reads as believable canon. Love, love, love it. It turned out so well! They're characterized very well and the scene is set perfectly. Well done love!

Author's Response: Than you, Shiloh! Don't worry about the time - this story's not going anywhere. :P It's great you were able to take the time to read and review it, no matter how long it takes.

The flashback seems to always be a problem for stories, and it's taken a while to get the hang of doing it. I'm happy that this way worked - while it wouldn't do to overuse this technique, it's one I enjoyed using, and that readers have liked it only makes it more tempting to use again. :D

Yay! It reads as canon! That's what I was hoping for, but wasn't sure if I'd achieved it. Trying to slip this into just the right place within the book kept messing me up, so I'm pleased that all the worry paid off, haha.

Thank you very much for this review! It's great to have so many different opinions on a story, to see all the different ways of that people have read it. ^_^

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