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Review:datbenik513 says:
Am immensely sad chapter. Very dark magic involved; the ritual depicted in a very powerful way.
How ironic, this twist of fate. Both Lily and Narcissa sacrificed themselves to protect their children, only the latter's sacrifice is rejected. Severus is getting another blow in his face as the second woman he secretly loved dies as well.
From now on, his situation would be far from enviable; distrusted by the Order, hunted by the DE; he would have to try survive on his own. And, he would have to fulill his vow, given to Cissy.
Jeez, I'm so overwhelmed!

Author's Response: This is one of my favourite chapters. It's dark yes. The ritual is made up although I took elements from various sources, mythology, Pagan rituals but it's not something real. Snakes are very important in many ancient cults, especially due to their ability to renew their skins. They are almost associated with eternal life and youth, I thought using one would be fitting

Sevvy, yes poor thing. I wanted for him to show his emotions. Yes, he better be careful from now on. Both Draco and Harry are going to prove to be a nightmare to him. Snape is a very intelligent and resourceful wizard though so catching him is not the easiest thing in the world either.

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