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Review:datbenik513 says:
This one is all about conflicts.
Well, we did know Bellatrix had never fully trusted Snape, but up until know it had never come down to wandwork. A skilled Legilimens as he is, he was able to foresee the curse coming, but from now on, he would have to watch his back. Bella is dangerous, even for her own kind.
In the meantime, the Burrow faces another conflict. Lupin has to give some answers for things he'd caused. Once the smoke's cleared, Harry can concentrate on Ginnys's "dream", if the word is at all apropriate here, as we still don't know what she saw. I loved this scene but I can't say I did like Ginny's behaviour. She's too much like my wife, too much out of the blue.
Hermione finally breaks down, after bottling her emotions after the death of her mother for too long. Guess why it's not Ron who's able to comfort her? Now? You get my point? :)
Draco is doing something which may prove very dangerous to him and to many others. Let's hope it will not be the case.

Author's Response: I always had the feeling after reading the vow scene in HBP that Bella was right about Snape. Snape took too many risks when they kidnapped Petunia and as a result they got away (albeit with casualties) so I can see that Bella would be angry and suspicious. I also wanted to show Voldy putting her down.

Now, Ginny, well the girl is fiery and she's not too happy to be taken to task for something she hasn't done but would really like to do. lol

Yes, I wanted Hermione to react later on, not right at the time. Now, Ron loves her dearly but hasn't got much experience when he comes to losing someone. Harry's had plenty and I'm not sure Ron is the best person to say the right thing in sad circumstances. I don't see Ron as some silly clown like some fanfic authors do but I still think that Harry would have taken the centre stage on this, only because he knows exactly how it feels. It's all very innocent though. The pairings still remain as they were.

Draco, yes, another one with more intuition that we saw in canon, although maybe it has more to do with Narcissa than with him (the intuition).

Thanks so much again.

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