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Review:Jellyman says:
Wow, that was amazing. I loved how you incorporated jealousy as one of the key attributes in Regulus decision to follow his parents. I loved how that contrasted with him being influenced by your OC and the way she led him down the other path. Because she smiled. I loved how you made such a heartbreaking moment in Regulus' life the very turning point in what made him what was to become.

You created Regulus as such a real character - he was inexcusably flawed and he knew it! He was easily manipulated, easily swayed and always retained his conscience - he doesn't veer out of character once! Brilliant characterization :)

Really, I have no criticism! And I'm sure that pains you :P But seriously, this was so well done, I'm not really surprised. I love the format - a letter is a brilliant idea, by the way, makes me wonder if Sirius would have received it. I think this can stand on it's own actually! No continuation necessarily needed, because it's all explained so well in the letter. But it would be interesting... So pick what you want :) But, in my opinion, definitely a Regulus/OC - much more fun :3

Anyway, wonderful work! I loved it! 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the jealousy vein of the story; somehow I just envision there being a sense of sibling rivalry between Sirius and Regulus.

And of course, smiles can be so important sometimes, and have a huge impact.

Haha, don't worry, it's not too painful ;) Ego-inflation always feels good. I glad you liked the story/format/characterization! I think I'm just going to probably leave this as a one-shot Regulus/OC after all.

Thanks so much for all the super-kind words!


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