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Review:scooterbug8515 says:
This chapter was brilliant! I really enjoyed it and I have a number of notes once more! Though this time they are all good!

The yes ma'am from Sirius was funny to be so out of character for in a good way seeing as we know things like that will vanish for him. It was a very nice touch to show his training.

The bit with the hat was so unique and well done. I don't think I've seen a Sirius sorting quite like it. His being upset and snubbing James was perfect. I always imagined that Sirius spent the night sulking and being rude. I am REALLY glad you played that out so many people make him all happy about it and I just don't see that happening when you are eleven you are scared and upset by something of the like.

Then Sirius getting a re-sorting! I never thought of that I just always imagined that Sirius got a no at every turn to get resorted it was fun to read!

Over all FANTASTIC job! I am really liking this and shall be putting it on my favorite's list to watch for more updates! (I especially liked Sirius' sulking there at the end!)

Author's Response: I am hoping to be able to show a lot of changes in Sirius as time goes on. Not really "big" changes, because the real Sirius has always been there underneath, but I want to see him become himself slowly :) So I'm glad you liked his politeness.

Whenever I read Marauder fics that involve their first year, the sortings always seem exactly the same. And usually its Sirius telling the hat he WANTS Gryffindor. I really don't think he'd have been thrilled :) As you said, he is only 11, and this is his first day away from home.

I think Dumbledore is the type of guy to allow Sirius to resort :D He let Harry double check, after all. Dumbledore probably could tell all along what Sirius would grow up to be like - he seems to know those things.

Thank you so much for obliging to read my story. It's been so long since I got any reviews on this one :) I'm really pleased you liked it so much, and am honored that it is now on your favorites list.


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