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Review:Fireball Nymph says:
Ummm I'm thinking more along the lines of "WHAT THE FREAKING HELL WAS SHE THINKING!" I so wanted her to get together with Sirius. Screw her family. Who cares if they want hero marry Rabastan? I don't! I know that eventually, Sirius and Mira will get together. I prefer sooner, though! :)** Wink Wink** Don't you want them to get together?. I was so happy when they snogged. At least Mira didn't push him off right away.

I love the paragraph when she realizes that all the things she was thinking in her head sounded so cliche. Like how their breathing mingled. Cliche or not? But still, I love fluffiness. And drama. And this story.

I love the title of this chapter. "The Complicated Love Life Of Mirabelle Rose" was so ironic. It captures thee meaning of the chapter so well.

I don't think that this cahpter seemed rushed at all. It was really good. And I'm not biased. Just because your one of my favorite authors doesn't mean that I'll tell you I love your chapters. I always love them though!

I love the last line. When Mira said "It's... complicated" So true. Loved it. Shear genius!

My favorite paragraph was when Mira accepted Rabastan's date offer, and then she saw Sirius looking at the pair of them, with his cold steel gaze. YOU can tell that Sirius is actually in love with her, and she's not another conquest like one of those other toys Sirius played with.

But I think that Mira has a right to not trust Sirius. I mean, he toys with girls emotions. I wouldn't trust him. And Mira's his best friend. Doesn't she know him best? So, she shouldn't rust him. Sirius has to prove himself. And I bet you, now in the next chapter, he's going to find another toy to play with to make Mira jealous. Isn't that how it always is? Or will your story be different.

I love the line whe the boys aske "Do you want him to shag you?" or somehting along those lines. FUNNY! I cracked up at it.

When I checked my feed thingamabob, and I saw that you had updated this story, I squealed. And I rarely squeal. Actually, I only squeal when you update a chapter in any of your stories. I can't help it.

Well, I cant wait for more. thanks for this awesome update. I'm so happy now! Thank you thank you thank you! And I love Sirius! Though he's such a player!

Author's Response: Uuuum, I'm thinking "WOW THIS IS AWESOME LOOK HOW AMAZINGLY LONG THIS REVIEW IS!!!" lol
But that seems to be the common reaction to this chapter. As well as the "screw her family" thing. And I agree!
But, if I had her immediately fall into Sirius's arms and live happily ever after, what kind of story would that be? A boring one.
So I'm going to make Mira go on a rollercoaster ride to make things more interesting! =P
Yeah, Mira is the kind of girl who gets a bit disgusted with cliche mushiness if you couldn't tell, ha ha, but every Romance has to have fluff!
I toyed with several chapter names before i came up with this and I was alittle leary about it but it was the best I could think of at three in the morning so I'm glad you like it! I'm glad you didn't think it was rushed and liked the different humorous bits I tried to incorperate too!
And yes, Mira does have some trust issues. Especially where Sirius is concerned now. She's very sensible, not one of those girls who gets so caught up in a guy that she can't see his flaws or that it's very possible he may not feel the same way.
I'm glad I got you to squeal (don't worry it happens to the best of us lol). And thank you thank you thank you for the fantastic review! It made my day!


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