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Review:Leney says:
this is awesome jenny! you've done an awesome job of getting readers hooked alreay. i can't imagine anyone reading the first chapter and not being excited to see the next installment, i know i am! i like your use of imagery and language, Edith's accent coming out is great. the only thing i picked up on really was Gary saying "Eleanor" instead of "Julianna", but I'm sure you've noticed and will fix it :)
it's a really good first chapter, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Hiya!

Thank you for such a lovely review! I'm so glad you liked the first chapter. I've also fixed that little error, thanks for letting me know :D

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