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Review:Alopex says:
Wow, this is a really unique idea for a missing moment! I love it! Great job! I have to admit I've never really stopped to think about what it must have been like for the Muggles who were caught in that "tornado" or the bridge collapse. It was just one more thing Fudge was telling the other minister about. I can't imagine how terrifiying it must have been for them, as any natural disaster is scary enough already. You described all the fear, confusion, and danger quite well.

I also liked your portrayal of Malfoy. Although he seemed a little braver than I expected of him in this situation, he mostly seemed in character. You portrayed him in a sympathetic light, without making him a total pushover. Even though Malfoy isn't one of my favorite characters, I couldn't help but think how nice he was being . . . sort of. I like that Alison retained her proper memory of the events and that she became more aware of the Wizarding World. There are a few occasions described in the books where the Ministry of Magic had to perform mass memory modifications on Muggle witnesses, and I have wondered how they managed to find and modify every witness's memory.

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