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Review:WeasleyTwins says:
Hello, WeasleyTwins here to review. Sorry for the extensive delay :]

First, I just want to say that you should capitalize the entire title, unless you choose otherwise. I suggest this because I have found that serious readers/reviewers of fanfiction prefer when a story's title is properly capitalized, spelled, etc.

That out of the way, I have to say that this is a powerful story. His pain is almost real, you describe the situation so excellently. I was just so intrigued by this young girl who changed it for Regulus. Smiles change people's lives every day and you have put that beauty into words. This is an excellent display of the inner struggles of a torn young man and your interpretation is just plain cool.

Overall, great job! 10/10

Shelby

Author's Response: Oh no worries :)

Hmm, come to think of it, capitalizing it might look better... I guess the only thing is, since I wrote this for a banner/title challenge, I just wanted to do it in keeping with what was given.

Smiles can make such a big difference for sure! I'm glad you liked the interpretation :) Thanks for the review!


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