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Review:AndrinaBlack says:
That was really good! I could hear the voice of Draco so clearly in this story! His dilemma was so clear as it was like it was written in HBP and then the alternative ending to the scene followed naturally. I never expected that to happen when I started to read the story as I thought it was just showing Draco's thoughts during that scene.

I like your ending and it seems really possible. Though it makes me wonder what would happen with Snape. Had he tried to help Draco enough for the unbreakable vow or not? I always wondered about that. How much did he really had to do and when was he forced to kill Dumbledore? Could they all have lived at that moment? But now I'm getting off topic from your story...

I really liked the end too, with "And I found no reason to question him." It just shows so perfectly how he at last completely chose that side. And with a kind of bonding between the two of them. I also liked Draco's ponderings about who he had betrayed. In that it stayed clear that if he had betrayed other people, he had always stayed loyal to his mother, and that was really sweet. Thank you for a really good read! :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! ^_^ I'm so glad that this whole scene was plausible. I really struggled at first to get inside Draco's head, but I'm happy to hear that it turned out well!

As for all the questions, there's a very good possibility that I'm going to write a chaptered fic that follows this one-shot, seeing as all these ideas popped up into my head as I was writing this. And it would answer most of those questions you asked. ^_^

Yay! That was one of the points that I was trying to make. Draco could betray everyone but his mother and that's part of what makes him Draco. And the ending kept getting changed until I was finally content with this one, so it's really reassuring to know that I ended it on a good note.

Thanks so much for the review! ^_^

-Alex


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