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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
Oh wow, this is so cute and wonderfully written! The characters were not only realistic and "alive", but also perfectly canon. Neville with his toad and awkwardness, Minerva with her stern logic and soft spots. And your Neville is particularly adorable, more so than one usually finds in fanfiction.

Then there's your writing style, which flows so nicely - you describe just enough without going overboard, really capturing the characters' thoughts and emotions. This line especially caught my attention:

He suspected - and indeed, he believed for the rest of his life - that McGonagall only entertained the rest of their conversation out of pure shock at his persistence.

This and other lines are filled with excellent humour - witty in a most satisfying way. I couldn't stop grinning while reading this. Thanks for writing such an excellent story! ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you for your amazing review! I'm glad the characters came alive for you. I was trying to give them a little more spark than they appear to have at first glance. Neville was interesting to write because this was kind of a transition phase for him - he's a little more confident than he was at the beginning of OotP, but probably nowhere near as confident as he was at the end of DH. So it was fun, trying to get him just right.

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