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Review:RandomRyter says:
Well, the first exit may be good for you, but I personally would have loved for you to have kept going. This is quite good. Can't wait for her to see Charlie. The only thing is that I wish the chapters had a little more in them, which would also make them longer. It feels like I'm missing something. Love this FanFic, though!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comments. I totally agree, the chapters aren't as beefy as I really want. I've never written a drama/romance before and am struggling to find the right balance. Hopefully once Charlie joins the story (teaser next chapter and then all Charlie after that!) it will get a better rhythm. Hopefully it will be less boring after that. Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

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