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Review:AndrinaBlack says:
That was dreamy. I had to read parts a couple of times to try to figure out when she was asleep and when she was awake and how she got from her bed to the lake and I still didn't quite get it. But that isn't a bad thing. When I came to the end I realised that it was meant to be like that. It was dreamy from the beginning to the end, leaving some open questions hanging. I believe that Fawkes at least was there anyway in "reality" because Luna had ashes over her and there was the feather. Such a wonderfully confusingish little Luna-like story! And it was beautiful too! I also loved how you made McGonagall show her soft side.

Author's Response: Hey! You caught that I really wanted it to be dream-like. I picture it saturated in bright, but slightly fuzzy colours, so you understand.

I think we all know that McGonagall has a soft side, but she just doesn't show it much. I wonder if she ever had children, or ever wanted children if she didn't have any.

As for how she got to the lake, it's up to the reader; did she sleepwalk? did she fly with Fawkes? Just because it was all in her head doesn't mean it isn't real (to quote DD).

I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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