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Review:Dilys Derwent says:
i love it, but what i said in chapter 1 is still true. you need to develop the scenes more and in different ways, and sometimes the dialogue is a little unbelievable. and i don't think you need the character thingys at the beginning because most of it comes across during the story. otherwise really good and i can't wait for the next chapter. keep writing!
Dilys :)

Author's Response: once again thanks for your response! i have a good chunk of the next chapter written so hopefully i'll have it finished soon. i'll try and work on developing the scenes.

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