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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
That little line from HBP, and you get all of this? It's quite amazing how much you put into this story: the Muggle-wizard relations, the ease with which wizards can erase memory, and Malfoy's inability to kill or harm anyone (which fits how he acts later in the book perfectly). You make Draco into the good guy, and surprisingly I like it - it happens too often in fanfiction, mostly Dramione, but you make it work with the canon very well, especially Myrtle's testimony of his actions.

Seeing the event from the Muggle point of view also made the story very interesting to read. Allison didn't have the language to describe the magic, yet you were able to make it clear what she was referring to. The one thing I noticed you could fix is that Muggle needs to be capitalized even when it's not at the beginning of a sentence - it's a proper noun, apparently. *shrugs*

Anyway, I really enjoyed this. It's a creative take on the challenge, and goes to show how amazing missing moments can be as stories. ^_^

Author's Response: Crazy isn't it. :P Haha, I'm really glad you took the time to read this, especially considering you're my all time favorite author. =D Thanks for reviewing (and I *think* I fixed all the Muggle words, I got most of them anyway) :P

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