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Review:marinahill says:
Wow, that was incredibly sweet :) I've never been a Snape fan, but be really redeems himself here, you've shown the inner depth I couldn't see before. I liked how childlike he seemed, even though Lily thought he had grown up, how he was so desperate to be her friend again. I think it's Lily that makes this piece so lovely - her hesitation outside his house and her red pea coat; it was charming and makes me dream of Christmas, even though it's months away! I feel a little chilly, too, thanks to your vivid descriptions. I held my breath in the moment before they kissed, I felt so happy for them. It's the ultimate happy ending for unrequited love :)

I'm so glad I checked this story out after you mentioned it in your post in the Memory Lane topic! It's been a pleasure to read.

- tell_me_what_the_truth_is

Author's Response: Hi! I was SO EXCITED when I saw this story had reviews! I'm really glad you decided to stop by!!

My ultimate goal was really to portray what their relationship could honestly have been like, especially after what happened in ootp. I kind of wanted Severus to be stand offish, and I hope I accurately portrayed that. And When I was writing it, the images popped so vividly out at me, I could litterally see Lily standing there in her coat, outside his door, hesitating.

I am so very happy you decided to come by and review this, it makes me very very happy inside :)


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