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Review:Alice says:
One thing: Try writing without all caps when people are screaming. It would be better if you just said, "No way!" screamed Rose. Also, really look out for your grammar and spelling mistakes. IM talk is not appealing to most readers. That's probably why you don't have many reviews. Good second chapter, though.

Author's Response: yeah i know about the spelling and grammer mistakes, i made the mistake of not writing the first couple of chapters on word first, then putting them on clipboard and correcting the mistakes, thanks for reviewing by the way, your feedback is very helpfull

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