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Review:Alice says:
I found this chapter a bit short, and you definitely just kind of... jumped into things. I would also recommend getting a beta, seeing as there are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. Smoothing these things out will make for a nicer read. Other than that though, you're doing a good job for your first fic.

Author's Response: yeah, the first 2 chapters were painfully short, shorter than i realized in fact. i didn't mean to jump into things as much as i did, but it was hard to find a place where it would make at least a little sense, i almost wrote an introduction, but whenever i tried to start, it ended up being longer than i intend the actual story to go on for, and i thought it would be rather annoying to have a ridiculously long intro for a fanfic thats only going to be like 7 chapters long.

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