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Review:datbenik513 says:
Breathtakingly beautiful, except the scene of Luna flying with Fawkes. This is a proper way to say one's goodbyes.

On contrary to your first reviewer, I didn't feel Luna being loopy here for one second. It's as if she suddenly aged several years, much more serious, much more adult. But in war people grow up much faster, we already knew that.

Luna will have a major role in my new story, Shadowlands, as well.

One question: how did you manage to have a story validated under the 800 word mark?

A very, very powerful story considering its length. Many emotions told in a powerful way.

Author's Response: Thank you for the nice review. Because of your PM, I know what you mean about Luna flying with Fawkes, so no sweat about changing it.

I don't think the first reviewer meant an insult by calling Luna loopy, she just meant that Luna sees things differently and I didn't take it as an insult. You're correct that I wanted this to be Luna as an adult, but child-like at the same time.

The word limit at HPFF for a chapter is 500. It's different on different archives.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, particularly since it's a short piece.

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