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Review:CrazyForYou says:
So far, I really like the beginning. I think the way you start out really expresses a lot of deep emotion, while still managing to not overwhelm the reader.

worked it - I think you mean worked it out.

dance three times - danced three times

Overall, I think you really managed to capture the passion and the raw feeling that Regulus feels. I like the way you weave mini stories throughout. The justification Regulus provided was very sincere and heart-felt.

I find Regulus a very difficult character to write, as he often become cliched or sterotypical, but I felt you managed to capture what could be his essence.

Very well done.

As far as a continuation, I think this story works great as a stand-alone piece.

Once again, fantastic job!

Author's Response: Ah, thanks for pointing out those typos :)

I tried to experiment a little, by going from Regulus's perspective, so it's great to hear that it was a relatively sucessful trial.

For the time being, I'm thinking that this will remain a one-shot.

Thanks a ton for the great feedback!


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