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Review:Elysium says:
SQUISH! :D

This is a wonderful prologue for a very believable pairing. You kept them both intrinsic to their natures that we see in canon, whilst at the same time showing the maturity that comes with age. I thought your repeated structure of the opening paragraphics in both their perspectives was a great way to really pull us in. And the writing itself is excellent :D

Gorgeous work hun xox

Author's Response: OMG, Kylie. I love you.:D Had free time, didya? ;p Lol. Anyway, I'm glad you think that the characterization is believable. I was a bit iffy on it and had a hard time editing and editing things out.;)

I'm glad you think the style of the openings were good. I had many sleepless nights over them. No kidding.:P

ILY, darling. Will post this in TDM soon..:)

~~C


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