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Review:Jellyman says:
Beautiful. I simply love it. I loved the characterisation of Dominique - she's accepted that they'll never be and she's working through it slowly, giving her an inner strength. I have a question though - in the final lines you wrote 'I smile ruefully to myself, promising not to pretend anymore.' I'm curious (or slow, depending on your perspective :P), does that mean she's not going to pretend she isn't in love with him because her love is 'insignificant'? Anyway, fantastic one shot! Well done :)

Author's Response: I'm sorry I didnt see this - I have not been keeping on top of things lately. Thanks for letting me know though :)

As for the pretending, i think it's a mixture of her not pretending to herself that she can be with him and pretending to be happy for him. Maybe a sequel is in order, and we shall find out ;)

thanks so much for the review, sorry for the late reply :)


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