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Review:RoseLolly says:
Oh. This is going swimmingly. I'm completely caught up, and I'm only two chapters in. I can't wait to see where this goes, and watch your characters. They're all deliciously vivid already, getting more and more defined as you go.

One little thing I wanted to point out. There are a few places where you refer to Silvius (sorry if that's spelt wrong) as Scorpius. In the same sentence and all, sometimes. So maybe a quick read over, or consider a Beta, though I'm unable to fault you for much of anything else. Its very well written, really.


Author's Response: I have just edited ch. 2 and got rid of those errors, should all be ok now but sorry about that! Thanks for your review!

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