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Review:nire says:
I read some reviews and you thought it was cliche!... no way! It's only a one-shot.. you have to get through things quickly. :)

I really liked this :) I am such a huge James and Lily fan. I love reading scenes where they get together. It makes my heart swell.
I would really like to see the same story from Lily's perspective. That would be so interesting. I really wanted to know what she was thinking throughout the whole thing.
James really is the biggest sweetheart. That line that you used where it tore at his heart... oh lord.. I practically died. It makes me so happy that they were able to get past their differences and live happily ever after [for 3 years. sigh :(]
Oh great.. now I have thought about their deaths. gah!

Anyways, I'm getting off track. I really liked this. I know everyone hates cliche - but I don't really think it's too bad.. plus I'm just a hopeless romantic and will love anything anyone does about how Lily and James get together.
That's why I'm writing one myself.

I loved Sirius and Remus. Loved how he was cat-calling and Remus then pushing him into the bush. Hilarious!
Also, I noticed that you eluded that Sirius didn't know how many girls were after him. That is a very different Sirius than I mostly read! A very nice change! :)

Anywayyy, loved your story. 10/10 for sure.


sorry this review is a bit all over the place.

Author's Response: Yes, you are right - it is a one-shot, and an old one at that, initially written to prove that the Lily/James ship was the best ship out there. (but I still think it's a wee bit on the cliched side, sorry :P I'm too much of a lit snob, haha).

But it is wonderful that you enjoyed it, taking the time to both read and review. ^_^ Telling the story from Lily's side would be interesting, and quite a challenge for me to write (I do like challenges). She's one of those characters who I write a lot about, but never from her perspective, I guess because her character is so... vague in canon.

The other Marauders make this story worth it (for me). :D They're so silly and ridiculous, pretty normal for teenaged boys, I suppose, haha. For Sirius, I stuck with canon for safety, trying to maintain what JKR had revealed about younger Sirius in the Pensieve. I'm glad you liked that characterization of him. :)

Thank you very much for this review! It's not all over the place for me, just really nice to read. ^_^

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