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Review:Tinkerbell01 says:
Hey there!

Sorry it took me awhile to get to your request, but I'm here! I think you've got an amazing start here. I really didn't see anything too particularly wrong with it, to be honest. I love how you portray Minerva's character so well. There aren't that many stories out there about her and I think you did a brilliant job.

As far as Mirabella's character, I like her. She seems such an interesting character. I love the glass flowers. I've never heard anything quite like them before. :)

I'm interested in finding out what Aurora did, but maybe somethings are better left unsaid, no?

Your story has me intruiged and I'm anxious to find out what happens next, so feel free to hit me when your next chapter is up! :)

Hugs,
Tink

Author's Response: Hi Tink :) No problem, thank you for coming to review my story and leaving such a nice, long, insightful review. Sometimes when I request and people leave a line or two, it's a little disappointing but yours is lovely! I'm glad you're enjoying this story so far and thanks for saying that about Minerva :) I want to stay true to her character but it's a little difficult, knowing so little about her aside from the stern, tight-haired schoolmistress we all know and love.

Glad you like Mirabella and you're right, I won't be expanding on Aurora's story, but I'll be leaving it open to interpretation. The only part of her story that touches Minerva's is the fact that she went against their parents' will and did what she wanted to do, no guilt or concern.

Thanks so much for your review and I'll definitely let you know when I update!


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