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Review:Eridanus says:
Jane here from the TGS review exchange ^_^.
Rin, I loved it! I thought it was absolutely amazing, terribly heart wrenching, but amazing.

Your descriptions were brilliant and I have to say that unlike some of the other reviewers, I liked that we didn't know what happened to her. It wasn't necessary for the piece and if I was you I wouldn't add it in. Please don't, lol.

"They laughed. Ginny laughed, Albus laughed, James laughed, Lily laughed. Lily. She laughed with everyone else. Because she was part of the family. And she was laughing with them."
There were many sentences in particular that I enjoyed, but I'm picking this section out because I loved the use of repetition and the sad irony of it.

The story flowed wonderfully and was so full of raw emotion that I would've cried if I was a big crier. I can't help but give you a ten.

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm really glad you liked it. And I'm almost glad that you didn't need to hear about Lily at all. Some reviewers, like you've stated, really wanted to know more about her. I guess I don't need to add anything in, then!

And thanks so much for your compliments. I'm always working to make this story better, because I was really hesitant to post it at first. Thank you again and again for the lovely, wonderful review!

- Rin

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