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Review:Misty_Rey says:
I completely agree with the last sentence. xD

Back to the story though, it was brilliant! Absolutely adorable and heartwrenching and heart-warming and all that other good stuff. I don't like Crookshanks much (then again, that's probably because I don't like cats in general) but I can apreciate and believe that Ron would confide in the furball. Its thoughts were quite amusing as well. But what really shone in this story was Ron himself. You've perfectly captured him and the essence of his character from the HP series, of what a thoughtless, insensitive to other people's feelings git he can be but also his insecurities and feelings of inadequacies, tying it all neatly to his jealousy of Viktor (which you mispelled but no big deal ^_^). Ron was just... Ron. And when he asked Hermione to sit on his lap, oh my. But then she did and it was just a really sweet moment between them. This entire story was sweet, fluff at its best. My only advice would be to look over this story as there were spelling and grammar mistakes but nothing glaring. Overall, an entirely enjoyable read. 9/10

~Misty

Author's Response: :D thank you so much !

Lol I wrote this at about 1.30 am so my grammar is probably awful as I was still tapping away with my eyes and brain somewhere entirely different - most likely my bed. :D

I'll run through it (when I'm more awake) and make the changes. :)

Sooo happy you thought I got Ron right, because I think he's the hardest character to do.
Again I'm very happy you liked it!

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