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Review:Eridanus says:
Two very twisted people you've got here, Jenneh.
You definitely set the mood well, the tension and lust were demonstrated expertly and it really flowed. Also, you've got a huge range of vocabulary going on here which is lovely, but sometimes I think you overused it; simplicity could have worked very well in this at times and added to the overall effect even more.

Other than that and it was wonderful and the 'swishing' was great!

Author's Response: Janeee! :)
Aww thank you love ;) I tried to write Rose as a completely different character for once, because you always see her as a 'goody two shoes' in most fics. Boring :P

Fair enough! I wrote it on a whim, edited it a bit then published, haha. I'll think about simplifying the language if I re-write it. :)

Thank you Janeee

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