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Review:singerhotti24 says:
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The dots might tell you how speechless I am. Really. Look at them one more time...

Evil Bubble Baths? Mamma Dobbs? Fake Sleeping?!?!!?!??! You. Are. Bloody. Unbelievable. Seriously. I'm not even kidding. I read this, and... didn't breath the whole time. I almost died, but it would have been worth it. It was bloody amazing. I might just say 'bloody' a million more times, because this chapter... Gosh. If I said I was insanely jealous before, multiply that times a million, and you get me, now, typing this review that has the word 'bloody' written in it more times than a sane person could handle. Good for me, you're not sane. haha.

I simply adore your comparisions. A storm to an evil bubble bath. My gosh, you're brilliant. Emma is just... wow. And Samuels is an idiot, but I love him too. : )

The only thing that stuck out to me... was that you didn't mention anything after Samuels came that they were in a 'Forbidden Forest'. Perhaps in the next chapter? If I were you (but obviously, I'm not because I'm not 'bloody' amazing...) I'd play up the 'Forbidden' part in the aftermath. Emma could make up some insane explanation as to why it should never happen again (if your story is headed that way) and how it was 'forbidden' becuase they were in the 'forbidden forest!' and end the rant with 'you bloody idiot'. Or something of that nature. But it's just an idea. from a not so amazing me to an amazing you :) haha.

But really. The most amazing chapter I've read so far. It's brilliant!

And as always, I'll be waiting for more. Thanks for the wonderful update!

Sincerely,

Greta

Oh. If my review didn't tell you: 10 (times infinity)/ a measly ten. They should readjust the scale just for you :P

tootles!

Author's Response: Dear Greta,
Hahaha this review just seriously made my day! I'm so happy to hear that you loved it (the dots totally convey your speechlessness). But yes, I will definitely play up the whole Forbidden Forest thing in the next chapter (there was just too much action to place this in), which I'm starting to work on right now! Thank you so much you brilliant reviewer with your brilliant reviews! You too, are 'bloody' amazing:)
Your Obedient Servant,
The Phantom

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