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Review:singerhotti24 says:
Hi :)

This is singerhotti24 from the forums. I was the crazy one who proposed the challenge for the 'original dramione' :)

I think you've a great idea here! You developed it quite nicely so far. THe only thing that bothered me are the facts that your Draco and Hermione are very OOC. Not once, in the books, I think, did Hermione giggle... She'd be polite though. She's not much of a flirt. Neither is Draco, really. But my gosh, did I ADORE your opening line for the story. :) It sucked me right in.

Harry was great! But as for Draco and Harry being really chummy and Draco confiding in Harry about what he thought a girl looked like, curves and all.. That's very OOC for him :) Other than their charactarizations, I love the idea! Hope this helped! Your grammar seems perfect to me! : )

Thank you so much for posting the link to this. Your writing is great!

Sincerely,
Greta

Author's Response: Thanks! Once I'm done, I will probably change it a lot, because it doesn't seem right to me, either. But I have a friend who's pressuring me into writing it quickly...very annoying, but I like to please my friends lol. Anyway, your review really helped and I will be changing a lot of things. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22


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